Friday, May 14, 2021
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Hi Ricardo
ReplyDeleteIt's me Raquel your sister and am one of the people who go to south hornby school. Love the work that you have done it is very ibteresting I read through it and found some mistakes and some things that you could fix up for next time.
1. The image on the next slide is very effective and may make people not see your writing clearly.
2.Some of the words that you wrote were mispelt.
3.And maybe next time you could change the font the size of the writing and the background.
Although in summary I think your writing is great.
From Raquel your loving older sister